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hi guys, I'm Logan, and here's my story. I've always wanted to be a great singer, but because I'm only 13, and broke, I've never found anything that I can do. I've tried everything I can, but nothing works. 

I've been trying to get my singing and songwriting started, and I need ideas for one of the songs that I will write. If y'all have any ideas, I'll take em. Also, Camille, congrats on becoming a great teacher. I would upgrade to full access, but I have no $$$$$. Please let me know what you think of this song.

The days are young,

The lights are dim,

The harm is done,

And my life is thin,

After the lights,

My love is lost,

The world is cruel,

And my heart is tossed

And even though all my life has gone to hell ,

My heart's waiting in the fire,

For a chance at a life of my own,

The damage is done.

All my friends said that I would have a chance

Living the life of my dreams,

And all the love that I got,

Was thrown away.

That's what I have so far. 

Hey Logan! I encourage you to keep writing. It's a wonderful creative outlet, and if you enjoy it, it's worth doing!

Please see this thread for a ton of songwriting resources and some ideas to get you started with your next song: https://www.30daysinger.com/forums/discussion/songwriting/resource-list-songwriting-for-beginners-live-lesson?page=1.

Also, while $ remains an issue, please check out our YouTube channel - we'll be posting more lessons there, and we currently have a handful of hour-long live lessons on various topics, all for free. You can subscribe to be notified about upcoming live lessons - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCzENK0ja2bdwGkrIvaoLZxw.