Improvement first week singing

Hey guys. Its my first time i try to sing. Dont expect anything good since i am awefull but i do want to improve. Also hope to get a better nicer voice. I dont like my own voice but hopefully i will start to sound better. 

First recording http://g2f.nl/0i7bn81

Second recordh ttp://g2f.nl/0gsgc1x

Since i have no experience i wonder if there is improvement. What is better 

Where do i need to work on etc... 

Hope you receive some feedback, Sylvia! Abram or I can offer feedback in a lesson: https://www.30daysinger.com/live-lesson. 

Hello Camille 

About the live critique session how you guys work then?

I am quit shy so as long as i dont need to say too much or sing at that moment i am fine :). As for the price and time could i get some extra info? 

Live lessons are one-on-one; and I do have students who prefer to play a recording of themselves rather than sing live - but you'll get the most out of your time if you're willing to sing with me so we can work through whatever you're struggling with! We'll do our best to put you at ease. Lessons are a good place to make "mistakes" and "sound bad" - that's the whole point! If you sound amazing already, you don't really need our help :)

Pricing is listed here; and timing is dependent on your availability and that of the instructor. When you go to book, you'll see our open slots on the calendar: https://app.acuityscheduling.com/schedule.php?owner=19771536&calendarID=4047616. 

Thanks for the info. 

Since English isnt my own language i wonder if there are also coaches who speal nl.

Some thing are also difficult to understand :)

In the mean time if anyone would like to give feedback. Feel free to 

awesome Sylvia!! 

To my knowledge, all of our coaches are English-speaking, Sylvia!

hello Jim Amato
thank you. i hope to keep improving.
been sick so havent been able to sing but i do hope soon ill be able to try again.

Camille van Niekerk
thanks for letting me know.
my english aint perfect but i will also get better with it for sure :)

Sure thing, Sylvia! Hope you feel better soon!